Book 01 Page 030
on 2019-01-07
at 10:57
Chapter: Chapter Two “Property Damage”
Characters: Jack Morson, Rae Yeon Dunning
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Webcomics like this should have a preamble with lots of background info on the world, part of the world or society it’s set in. Tell us about Nirvana’s origins or something. Its citizenry. Founders. Some history. So we don’t have to jump in cold and 27 pages later we still have no idea what it’s about.
For a webcomic like Mock Girl that wouldn’t be necessary as it occurs within a fictionalized version of our own world. But the world of Nirvana is different and we need to know about it before we begin.
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